When it comes to fundraising, how you present yourself is key. Clear and concise is what you want. This is about a succinct as it gets.
- This is who we are
- This is what we do.
- And we’re good at it.
- We have a challenge, born of opportunity.
- If we seize it, magic happens.
- Which benefits all of us.
- We’re almost there. (what we have accomplished/raised already)
- You have what’s missing.
- And this is what we can do together, starting here.
From Geoff MacDougall‘s One Pitch web page: http://onepitch.wordpress.com/